so sublime

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    so sublime
    my skin
    so fair like the soft white sand out by the ocean
    my body
    moves like the breeze swirling around the sea side
    my voice
    speaks softly like the waves swim on the massive waters floor
    my eyes
    they shine as bright as our sun, and gives such radiant glares
    my touch
    like an angel, from the heavens that hear our praise
    i dream the day i become of what i speak
    and maybe ill have such beauty


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    lonewolf commented on so sublime

    03-09-2009

    nice poem. physical beautiful is awesome, inner beauty is powerful.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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