i thought you were my friend

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    i thought you were my friend
    but it turns out your were a lier.
    you've deceived me, and hurt me, and yet you don't know how to apologize for it, i loved you for two whole years, and gave up to much for you, it was a waste, and seeing you today made me realize you are nothing, you call yourself a solder, yet you waste your breathe and scream at me, when people out there don't even get to take another breathe, your worthless, i don't need you, i can make it on my own , none really gets to be happy do they?

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    honesty34 commented on i thought you were my friend

    07-28-2009

    I felt the meanin in your words and i think your a great writer..keep up the great work
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    beautifuldeath commented on i thought you were my friend

    01-15-2009

    I agree with Spacer. this has the potential to flow quite well. reading it aloud also helps quite a bit. I commend you for portraying your hurt and anger so vividly.
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    brokengirl727 commented on i thought you were my friend

    01-11-2009

    I can really relate to this and i can almost feel your anger. Great job
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    Spacer commented on i thought you were my friend

    01-11-2009

    I Recommend gathering all these thoughts of anger and making it into something with more Flow...to get a better rating. But i liked that you didn't hold back very nice
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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