So far away, Some day

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  • Lost Love

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    Waiting for the love to return home to me.

    So far away, Some day

    So far away, so long,
     So long i must say.

    So long to the dreams that pass me by,
     Like endless clouds in the sky,
    I do cry.

    So i will see you some day,
     Some day, so far away.
    But in my heart,
     Your love shall stay.
    So far away.

    Your love will never be replaced,
     Like the sweetest wine,
    An endless taste.
     Just like love,
    I will see you some day.
     
    So far away,
     See yea babe.

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    ladypoet commented on So far away, Some day

    06-25-2009

    I am loving your 3rd stanza. This poem has a cozy feeling to it. Short, simple, yet meaningful. -Lady P.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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