SMOKING EFFECT

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    SMOKING EFFECT

    Rise up early
    Raise higher and higher
    Lifted high up
    Puff out left the damage
    Escape from gravity no problem
    Doer left with the damage
    Doer left with the problem
    Escape impossible, gravity finally had it way

    Promise to satisfy you
    Can’t promise your safety
    Your safer without my satisfaction

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    jadienblu commented on SMOKING EFFECT

    12-18-2008

    i just want to know how you say it when you read it...i think it is misunderstood...by others ..but you get it just fine...i like it!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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