FEAR MY BEST FRIEND

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    FEAR MY BEST FRIEND
    I could do many things without you
    your warning me always hinders my progress
    your warning prevents me from getting into trouble
    your warning make me timid
    you make me hesitate and stay aloof

    your advice mostly does me no good
    i yarn for you to leave me alone
    i need to make bold steps
    I must take the bull by the horn
    my friend will not allow me
    he whispers you will be hurt

    He says stay on the safe side.
    Success only comes with adventure
    Fear leave me to decide.
    My friend always have upper hand.
    The day our friendship cease is the day of freedom.

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    devaamido commented on FEAR MY BEST FRIEND

    06-05-2009

    The cognitive meaning of this poem is well expressed, but I have trouble feeling it or finding it's rhythm, cadence, mitre or rhyme. It's a good conceptual piece, but as a poem, it needs more work.
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    hope

    06/09/2009

    Thanks for your comment, i am only an Amateur on writing

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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