shooting

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    best read after 'the play ends'. this poem is short and is a combilation of many things. don't take it literally.

    shooting

     If you blame me one more time i will take this gun and shoot you.
    If you think this is a metaphor then i will have to say i warned you.
    If you believe that i can be used for games of the heart,
    then i must inform, you my thinking is very dark.
    Negative and positive are all relative in my mind,
    You are positive that i won't shoot and i negatively accept that you are alive.

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    kelzclusive commented on shooting

    09-15-2009

    wow. u sure can play arnd with words sistah. nice piece.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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