She walks in beauty

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  • Beauty Of Angels

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    Inspire by angels who walk among us..

    She walks in beauty

    She walks in beauty, eyes soft,

    Innocent; silky breast that captures

    men’s heart, her alarming whiteness,

    making angels turn dark.



    In times of sorrow, she's the light; if she

    cries, her tears breakdown into drops of

    divine moist. Wrapped in her skin, never

    has a sin, her lips turn to fear in



    the eyes of evil. Her sacred presence makes earth

    heavenly; her beauty blinds the power of vision,

    her virtuous is an envious, making instinct

    jealousy take over. She walks in beauty.

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    kdarcy commented on She walks in beauty

    12-13-2010

    I love the concept and know what you want to say. It reads a bit jumbled, it might be the english, still a nice write. Be well and post something again soon k
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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