Separated

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I havent met my little sister who is 3yo

Separated

 
Arriving on a late flight
I'd hurry to your bed,
with tears blurring my sight,
to meet the flower of my life.
 
Paralyzed i would wait,
to see the blossom of your eyes.
 
So far, i can only imagine
what it would be like
to walk in the radiant sunshine
with your hand in mine.
 
You haven't been here long,
yet i'm a captive of your heart.
 
By myself for so long,
then you came along.
Even though im not at your side,
we're united and never alone.
 
Although your father isn't there,
you'll never lack that kind of love.
 

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Worthless commented on Separated

07-24-2012

I agree with what she said... I see you havent been on here in quite some time, I havent either.. Im lucky if i get a few minutes or an hour every few months.. anyways, maybe you'll return to put some new ones up. I usually write all the time but I never get a chance to submit them on here... blah blah blah. I really like this one.

simoneaugustus commented on Separated

10-12-2009

This was really touching. You are such a gifted writer.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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