SECRETS

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  • The Other Side

    SECRETS

     I have a secret.......
    A desire you might say......
    I'm not telling.......
    Just you wait and guess.....

    I share it with few words.....
    I let it show..........
    How do you see me......
    I want to know......?


    Man,woman.child...........?
    I just want to know........
    I just want to know......
    I try not to be wild......


    I can dress me up tonight......
    I can take a ride...., in my car....
    Which one will win the fight......
    Will we end up in a bar,........


    Dancing on the floor....
    Grabbing the dance pole......
    One thing is for sure........
    I'm  reaching out for more......


    I'm dressed up tonight.......
    A lil skirt,blouse and heels.......
    I guess she won......
    The olther side of me!!!!!!

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    rainyxsun commented on SECRETS

    07-17-2010

    I really got hooked on the beginning. But it was hard for me to figure out the secret. Great poem though. I got to picture a lot of things. (:
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    am2anangel commented on SECRETS

    12-27-2009

    Wow again red. sheesh you got me hooked on your work right now. You show a true battle of your inner personalities and proudly show who you are. Well done.
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    knight4696 commented on SECRETS

    12-09-2009

    Doesn't appear to be a secret ... But the poem is quite intriguing ... gives us a view of a lifestyle many would be timid in sharing. Thank you for your honesty and courage. It's refreshing. Great write!
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    redbloodink

    12/28/2009

    ty Night...... I'm glad that I can share and every-one here seems to be open enough to at least see how I feel......red

    summerrose35 commented on SECRETS

    12-03-2009

    You are a talented person who is not afraid to themself!Kuddos!!! Nice legs too!
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    redbloodink

    12/03/2009

    well ty Rose

    HopeOhlarik commented on SECRETS

    12-02-2009

    one think i keep seeing is how proud and unscared you are to say "this is me!" im glad to see it, a lot of people hide and act like they're something that they arent. wtg red!
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    redbloodink

    12/02/2009

    ty Hope..... I try to just be me... Red

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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