Precious Star

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    Precious Star

    Precious Star

     

    Everywhere I look I see nothing but beauty
    I now see Stars in the sky which is so moving
     
    The longer I gaze the brighter it shines
    for it is the greatest and I want it for mine
     
    This Star makes me feel like never before
    it pierced my heart straight through the core
     
    I pray this Star feels the same
    that the love I’ve acquired isn’t in vain
     
    There's no other Star that can fill my heart
    A fairy tale in motion I'd die if we part
     
    I pray this Star knows how I feel
    That feelings I have, have never been so real
     
    So my Precious Star where ever you may be
    Know that I love you, and your all I need.
     
    JD Wright

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    DaleJohnson commented on Precious Star

    11-26-2009

    when you wrote this you must have either found what you were looking for or knew I wonder which or both
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    BigDaddyCash commented on Precious Star

    11-25-2009

    Where ever your star is you can bet your life she's waiting for you to find her. Could this be a fantasy waiting to be a dream come true. You write with so much emotion and heartfelt feelings that my thoughts are stimulated to write poetry of love. Thank you for letting me share this with you. LOL, BDC
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    jdwright

    11/26/2009

    It's funny I wrote this poem some 17 almost 18 years ago, about my first love when I was in high school..lol and it transformed itself into a life long dream and pursuit of something else, amazing how things can apply to so much more than the single moment that they are concieved in.....

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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