Playing the Cello

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  • Sadness

    Playing the Cello

     A deep scenario 
    Sitting while playing the cello
    Sad to mourn
    Mourn to be born
    A terrible dream
    A horrible thing
    I sit here singing in acapulco 
    While I am playing the cello
    Copyright © October 2009
    Abbey Lane

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    kmooney commented on Playing the Cello

    10-29-2009

    I love the simplicity of this poem. I love the cello. Thanks for sharing. Kevin
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    Dancer022597 commented on Playing the Cello

    10-27-2009

    Hey i know how you feel. I play the cello too, it's a wonderful thing. Keep up the good work!
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    Marsink commented on Playing the Cello

    10-22-2009

    Wow! sounds like a real tragedy. If you feel that life is hard in that environ, you've got a long way to go, sweetheart. My 17 yr old mourns her 12+ hr days in home school.
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    PenCatz

    10/22/2009

    I know I have a nine hr school day that was just a poem not real life thanx for commit

    Marsink

    10/30/2009

    BTW I love the cello, Kiddo and you have everything to write for! Write on & play on. You are most welcome!

    dumplin commented on Playing the Cello

    10-22-2009

    Acapulco, LOL. Nice work, if a little too short. You have a gift, you just need to let it pour out of you until it is through. Don't be in a hurry.
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    ravenrose commented on Playing the Cello

    10-22-2009

    it was good. ur young your writing will improve as you get older
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