New Friends

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New Friends

I have a brand new friend

He really is quite sweet

We talk almost every day

It really is a treat

 

He makes me smile

And when it’s late I have to go

He begs me to stay a while

But my mom says “No!”

 

He makes me laugh and cry

He is silly

My have the days gone by

He is sweet like a jelly-belly

 

New friends are great

They all make me smile

I know I can’t wait

But I guess I will wait a while…

Copyright © October 2009
Dandy Lion

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featherscribe commented on New Friends

11-20-2009

A very cheerful, well rhymed, well organized, and to the point poem about young adult friendship. Lighthearted and innocent . I enjoyed reading it.

kmooney commented on New Friends

10-30-2009

Very nice and heartfelt. I am touched. You did a great job. I think this is so good. Keepit up. Thanks for writing it and sharing it with everyone. K

Marsink commented on New Friends

10-30-2009

You are a sweet writer; and it is so evident the way you frame your thoughts into word

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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