Picture

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  • Emotional

    Picture
    trapped in a moment - frozen

    never wanting to move

    until I stop believing it could last

    for ever.

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    lustfulsoul commented on Picture

    08-04-2009

    This piece bleeds a sense of emotional madness. The frozen moments within our hearts are often believed to be controlled. Sort of like a portrait, until we stop believing that they can last forever :)) Outstanding job!
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    Sleeves

    10/13/2009

    Funny I never thought this one would get any comments, let alone high rating :) Thank you!

    nickyssecrets commented on Picture

    05-05-2009

    I like that it is so brief. Brief and powerful. Well done. Thank you for sharing!
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