Personified Promise

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  • Emotional
    • Kandrew
    • is so sorry she's been away so long! Trying desperately to catch up!

    Personified Promise
    If a Promise Could Talk…

    Do not search for me
    I'm nowhere to be found
    In the never-never land
    I'm forever bound

    Do not remember me
    I never did exist
    I am the amnesia
    Your trying to resist

    Do not wish for me
    I'm no part of a dream
    I'm not what you want
    Because I'm not what I seem

    Do not reach for me
    For I cannot be touched
    I don't even have the tongue
    To tell you half as much

    Do not pray for me
    I'm not among the souls
    I am even emptier
    Than the hollowest of holes

    Do not feel for me
    Pity is for pain
    and because I have no heart
    There's nothing you can gain

    Do not believe in me
    From me no words are spoken
    I do not hold a care for you
    I am the promise broken

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    Paradice21 commented on Personified Promise

    10-09-2009

    Loved the title.... Great Flow and usage of Words!This is a Very wonderful Poem!!
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    EasilyBroken commented on Personified Promise

    05-07-2009

    this is amazing! honestly i really enjoyed reading this and plan on reading the others! Keep up the good work
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    bandit1192 commented on Personified Promise

    02-26-2009

    You write so beautifully. You inspire Me to look at what I write and think, I can be better. Thanks TS
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    Kandrew

    06/26/2009

    Thank you TS.

    DeepEclipse commented on Personified Promise

    02-25-2009

    Wow. I like the way you never repeated the stanza's the same. This poem shows some true skill in you. Enjoyed the read.
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    Jonzes commented on Personified Promise

    02-24-2009

    I have to be honest with you...your poems are some of the BEST that I have read on this site. I am still trying to tear myself away from them so I can get back to work...but I am losing that battle. Keep up the wonderful work.
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    Kandrew

    06/26/2009

    Wow. What a wonderful compliment. Thank you Jonzes. Truly. (now get to work!) ;)

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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