not really

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    not really

     did you love me
    not really

    did you care
    not really

    why should i do this alone
    you left me here to roam

    i tried to make you see
    that i needed you to help me

    i went to work, you stayed home
    you did nothing but complain and moan

    i took care of kids
    i took care of you,
    i am a woman
    shouldn't i have help from my man

    now what will you do....
    you'll probably find another
    but will she put up with you?

    i gave you my all
    you let me fall
    why??

    what did i do so wrong
    why didn't you appreciate me
    now that it's too late
    i wonder if you see

    did you love me
    not really

    did you care
    not really



    sorry it came to this but i should let you know
    i'm letting you go

    i have to in order to survive

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    Mangus commented on not really

    07-08-2009

    I feel the pain of this piece. Unfortunately, I pain that I have felt myself. Love is like a double-edged sword sometimes. BTW they make a lot of sense. Thank you for sharing so openly.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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