not me for you; but your for me

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    im bored....what can i say

    not me for you; but your for me

    i used to think that you would change
    i have now come to realize
    that you never will
    i gave you chance after chance
    i helped you build bridge after bridge
    and you burnt all them bridges down
    you must think your funny
    to me your jus a clown
    always smiling bout somethin
    never smiling at meh
    always leaving me to be wit sumone else
    someone more important
    no matter who they be
    they are obviously more important than me
    i hope that someday youll see
    that i didnt need you
    you needed me

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    AshRenee commented on not me for you; but your for me

    07-14-2009

    I like this poem a lot. I've never read anything quite like this. Well, sort of. The beginning, wanting change, but not getting any, was familiar. But the end, where you change it to where you recognize that he needed you. Most people don't realize that they're needed.
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    fawndesno10

    07/14/2009

    took a while to realize...im the best thing other than our son thats ever happened to him...and him to me...he will realize someday tht he needed me...someday...

    jandh4ever commented on not me for you; but your for me

    07-08-2009

    Its really cute. Guys are stupid like that. They never know what they have until it is gone. good job
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    NitaBoo commented on not me for you; but your for me

    07-07-2009

    Whenever he does, if he ever does, I hope ur strong enough to not let it suck you back in....
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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