My Time

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This is really about playing with the English language than it is any deep message about life or death. I was trying to see how many ways I could make use of the long "O" sound. So, if you get some deep message out of it, that is credit to your imagination...cause I was just playing around one day, and this is what came out.

My Time

Not my time to see the snow,
  nor, for me to row;
wasn't the time to feel the blow,
  it just wasn't --- my time to go.

Who placed best in show,
  not me, I'd never know;
faced the devil, a fearsome foe,
  but this time wasn't --- mine to go.

Found a friend, called me Shiloh,
  seeds of peace I had to sow;
like a whirlwind, I could not blow,
  wondered --- is this my time to go?

Winter wheat waves so-n-so,
  during harvest the farmers mow;
away with the wind the chaff gets thrown,
  like the chaff --- it’s my time to go.
    © 2004 Randolph D. Brown, Jr.

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Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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