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There are times when a person comes into our life, and reaches the deepest part of us, without us really ever even knowing it...until it is too late. That relationship is to be cherished like a rare jewel, a warm spring day, the first breathe after a restful sleep, or even having all your buttons in place.

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From the closet I withdrew,
  my most favorite sweater - like new,
over my shoulders I placed it on,
  then noticed something was gone.

Beginning at the bottom,
  I buttoned on-by-one,
there still was a draft,
  even when I was done.

Something was just not right,
  couldn't tell what was amiss,
there were only five buttons,
  only one did I miss.

Gone, no more daily paper,
  last one, not another wafer,
snowflakes turned to light shower,
  bare stalk, now barely a flower.

As a button lost off a dress,
  these things would I miss,
the gaze from your eye,
  the gently sweet taste of your kiss.

Only one that is missing,
  one buttonhole left incomplete,
an echo through a deep chasm,
  no reply, just a repeat.

I could sew on another,
  but that just wouldn't be,
a suitable replacement,
  or who you are to me.
© 2003 Randolph D. Brown, Jr.,

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Crush commented on Button

09-25-2012

all i can say is that, i will be back to read more of YOU ! very wonderful stuff so far. thanks for sharing.

Isaiahjanae commented on Button

02-04-2010

I tremendously enjoy how you take the time to write a Poem Commentary. Your presentation of them poem, makes to me the poem = much more interesting. I truly LOVE this poem and think it should WIN the contest !!! Love, me

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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