My Poetry

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    • dustydai
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    My Poetry

     Everything that I hold dear,
    be it far or be it near,
    is poetry,

    Every story I've been told,
    Every frail hand I did hold,
    is poetry,

    Every child that I have held,
    every hurt heart, I've tried to quell,
    is poetry,

    there are no words enough to tell,
    all lifes joys, and pains,
    heavens and hells,
    except through poetry

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    devaamido commented on My Poetry

    09-20-2009

    This writing has emotional appeal & for that I rate it 9. But, I really don't believe it to be factually correct. While poetry may be found in everything, it's not the same as the representation of things (metaphor) that poems represent. Polished up metaphors may seem more palatable to human beings than the world the Creator gave us, but they aren't the same thank God!
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    latinangel commented on My Poetry

    09-20-2009

    I completely agree. When spoken words and outward feelings fail me I can turn to poetry and express myself fully. Beautiful job! I give it a 10.
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    koolmom0 commented on My Poetry

    09-20-2009

    Oh my this is a beautiful poem and so well written. Very true words. Poetry is all around us, I don't know about you but I feel very blessed. As a fellow poet I have the pleasure of reading great poems such as this. Love Koolmom
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    jferclark commented on My Poetry

    08-19-2009

    yes...yes. perfectly worded and oh so true. Loved it.
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    dustydai

    09/06/2009

    Hi jferclark, Thank you for your comments and thoughts on my poetry, I really do appreciate them. I also have 2 more that I entered in the contest, I'd appreciate your input on them when you have the time. Thank You So Very Much!!!Paula

    StandingBear commented on My Poetry

    07-12-2009

    It's all so true, the balance to all of life's happy and sad moments .. all can be expressed with poetry when other avenues come to a standstill. Great write.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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