My Invitation

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    Poem Commentary

    A prayer for the damned, Hope when all is lost. An act of futility, Something more than nothing

    My Invitation
    My love
    if you are 
    willing to step
    off the edge
    to spin 
    in circles
    once again 

    This greatest
    of dances
    we perfected
    so well
    An endless
    romance 
    with a story
    to ontold

    Lets say
    the truth
    lets live a lie 
    lets burn down 
    the candle
    lets watch 
    the flame rise

    The sun
    it sets 
    the bright
    moon shines
    morning will
    come
    day will
    arrive

    My love
    with your
    hand held
    deep in
    mine

    Nowhere is
    somewhere
    at this
    point in
    time


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    sandyb commented on My Invitation

    11-04-2012

    I really like this poem. The stories of love and hearts broken are stories I enjoy hearing over and over. I read it a few times.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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