My Credo (Forgive me for my actions)

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    My Credo (Forgive me for my actions)

    Constantly shaking my head
    Persisted on my knees to beg
    To wait for some shred of light
    Seems all is putting up a fight
    Living the glummest of days
    Worried about a future not so bright
    Some days I feel buried and dead
    Maybe I just let to much go to my head
    Like ... Read Morethat of a gravestone, maybe
    this is overblown?
    And that my true consciousness
    is not shown
    My conscious hiding like a felon
    fleeing a crime scene
    Some days I feel my life is that mean
    Wish I could come out this funk clean
    That’s not me though
    Merely a stuck dreamer, with thoughts
    I like to ponder
    Taken onto paths that put man under
    A thunder nobody else can see
    Noises so strong, they could tear
    down the trunk of a tree
    But as far as this path takes me
    Hope that something else could
    awaken me
    Unto the pleasures that are unknown
    A disaster that my gifts are not shown

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    lightcourier commented on My Credo (Forgive me for my actions)

    05-03-2009

    Don't put the candles under a bushel basket! Good word k. Very rappy rhythm. Thanks!

    Nebiyah71 commented on My Credo (Forgive me for my actions)

    02-17-2009

    Yeah!! I like this poem. The rhythm was there. I was with you from beginning to end. It's revealing yet lacks optimism and passion... art mimics life - life mimics art.. welcome existence - welcome life - creativity welcomes you...and so forth. I'm going to find one of your happy ones, okay.

    Niecy commented on My Credo (Forgive me for my actions)

    02-17-2009

    Simply Beautiful!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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