A Little Ice Would Be Nice

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    A Little Ice Would Be Nice
    Snow would be nice
    How about a chance of rain
    With all of this heat,
    How can a person take it?
    However could a person make it
    These humid tempertures
    get on my nerves
    If hell is like this,
    death is what I deserve
    Because I am burning up
    Someone please make this heat retreat
    So that me and weather can
    meet on a common ground
    So that I can live and relax
    And turn this frown upside down

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    lightcourier commented on A Little Ice Would Be Nice

    05-03-2009

    Nice. Clever. Good work. Thanks!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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