Metal Machine

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  • Metal
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  • Blood
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  • Evil
    • ,
  • Darkness

    Metal Machine

    slicing through the dead of the night
    a chainsaw of demon light
    feel the cut deep down into your bone
    excitement feeds the frenzy as you moan

    I crave the blood
    unleash the flood
    feed the metal machine
    hear the metal machine
    fear the metal machine

    desolation rises from the black pool
    the breeder of the lifetakers tool
    delivers like a hammer from a thousand blows
    my evil screams as your blood flows

    I crave the blood
    unleash the flood
    feed the metal machine
    hear the metal machine
    fear the metal machine

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    optimistic commented on Metal Machine

    07-03-2009

    I think I fear the metal machine yet even more powreful I fear GOD. this peace was masterful you stuck to the subject and tone and demolished the ending line with a crushing blow great write.
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    brutusmaxximus

    07/03/2009

    Thanks. I appreciate the comment. I love writing and I'm actually a New Reporter by trade. So, I have a great mix of influences and I always seem to be writing.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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