Leather Whip

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  • Leather
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  • Love
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  • Sex
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  • Bondage
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  • Kiss
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  • Lips
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  • Women
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  • Breasts

    Leather Whip
     
    INSANITY GRIPS MY MIND
    MY BODY SHAKES
    WHEN I SEE THE BIND
    THAT OUR LOVE MAKES
     
    WHEN YOU CRACK THE BLACK LEATHER WHIP
    ELECTRICITY RACES
    WHEN YOU CRACK THE BLACK LEATHER WHIP
    LOVE TRACES
     
    OBEY THE PAIN THAT CALLS
    AS YOU BREAK MY WILL
    IN BETWEEN THE WALLS
    I MOVE IN TO KILL
     
    WHEN YOU CRACK THE BLACK LEATHER WHIP
    ELECTRICITY RACES
    WHEN YOU CRACK THE BLACK LEATHER WHIP
    LOVE TRACES
     
    I TASTE YOUR LOVE
    THAT STAINED MY LIFE
    AS YOU STAND ABOVE
    REBELLION RUNS RIFE
     
     
    WHEN YOU CRACK THE BLACK LEATHER WHIP
    ELECTRICITY RACES
    WHEN YOU CRACK THE BLACK LEATHER WHIP

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    Tempestlady commented on Leather Whip

    06-20-2009

    Very songlike. The last passage could make a good chorus. Freaky, but fun and safe and honest. I ould try to put it to music. Write on...
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    brutusmaxximus

    06/20/2009

    Thanks. Yeah, what I write are probably songs. I think in music. When I hear a beat, I write to it. When I see a beautiful woman, I usually write something. I do have some of my writings which are probably more poem than song. I love heavy metal music and wished I had become a singer in a group. What do you write?

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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