Loveless

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A man that I see in my mind all the time....even though he can never be real. A little love story of his life...I guess :P

Loveless

Your eyes so angry yet so lovable, like a man that would do anything for his lover.
Your mouth so tough yet so tender, like someone who knows how to win wars with words.
Your shoulders so big yet so fragile, like a man who has worked his whole life.
Your arms so defined yet soft, like someone who doesn't care how he looks.
Your fingers so swift yet gentle, like a man who touches her woman right.
Your legs filled with scars yet they take pride in every step they make, like a man who 
won his war with pride.

Finaly those hands. 
The hands of a killer.
The hands of a lover.
They're like water,
So gentle yet so rough.
They bring life and take it away.
Everytime you touch me you bring life, yet I've seen those hands hurt the ones who've 
hurt me and your family. 
Your so foreign to me yet I feel like I've known you forever.
So never stop gazing at me.
Never stop kissing me.
Never stop touching me.
Never stop holding me.
And every time I'm in your deadly arms my love flutters back to life and my heart beats again and I start to think that I can live again...

One deadly day came
And with my last breath, I told you I was sorry, for not realizing it before, that the man I always wanted was right there beside me, and that I always loved you, and I always will, even when it's the end.
For that he cried out her name 
and held on to her for the eternity 
that he will live alone. 
In the night Loveless.

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shakeme4life commented on Loveless

11-30-2010

this is a poem in motion , it moved the film created in my mind from one scene to the next , yet it was heard as a gentle whisper .

AngelByDeath

11/30/2010

oh wow...thank you :)

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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