Candle
If you were a candleThe last one there
Keeping me away from death
The only source of warmth
I would pick you up
Hold you tight in my hand
and suddenly...
Blow you out.
Throw you on the ground.
Candle
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Poem Commentary
I was sitting here...with four candles. All of them almost out of their "juices" and I was thinking of my current situation...this is the resultThe last one there
Keeping me away from death
The only source of warmth
I would pick you up
Hold you tight in my hand
and suddenly...
Blow you out.
Throw you on the ground.
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lonelyboy77 commented on Candle
11-29-2010
- This is harsh and emotional using a minimal amount of words. Good write!
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11/29/2010
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