Love Tricked Sick

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    Love Tricked Sick

     You put your heart way out on the line
    You know for sure it's love this time
    You feel like you never have felt before
    You loose your self and you jump through its door
    To a place where every dream seems to be coming true
    To a place where your heart has lost all shades of blue
    This feeling you feel is higher than high
    It's incredible an all you can do is big smiles
    Then you discover you are in all alone
    The one who was with you has played you as a drone
    Like you are mechanical or some kind a toy
    They have played with you for some distorted joy
    You land hard as you take the great fall
    Every thing you felt was nothing at all
    Now you sit broken an your eyes only cry
    Your heart is so shaken and a part of you dies
    To never come back it will always be lost
    The price of love comes with such great cost
    Somewhere in the future you will remember the high
    After you recover from the love sick lie
    But always is one who will catch you as you fall
    The Prince of Peace, Jesus, the great lover of all

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    blackfootlady commented on Love Tricked Sick

    11-30-2010

    Hello My long lost friend.I miss You.I hope you come back to the Poetry links.I miss Your writes.Never give in and never give up hope.For You are a son of God. God Bless-Black
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    Olan01 commented on Love Tricked Sick

    09-14-2010

    Love comes at risks, whether as a friend or a lover we put ourselves on the line. In the emptiness of what is left is the self, the hardess one to love and the one required to love in order to love others. This is a good poem that expresses the emotion of lost. Dwell in love, peace and freedom, Olan
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    BikemanRJ commented on Love Tricked Sick

    04-14-2010

    Very true Christ is always there when you need him just call his name. You may need to cast you net on the other side of the boat when he tells you to there are other fish just waiting to be caught in the deep sea of love. God Bless Randy
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