LAUGHING TOGETHER AS FRIENDS

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    • ladypooh
    • I am back,stronger and better. I have truely missed everyone,and I will be writting soon God bless each and everyone.

    Poem Commentary

    This started out in a friend request, that's where Laughing together as friends got it's birth. from this point it's a shout out to all of my friends that I have gain here at Original Poetry.com. I had to go through a lot to learn how to be a friend and the reward was that I would draw friends. this is truely a blessing as I read the poems, I share the feelings of each and every ones life. and I feel a strong family growing together here.

    LAUGHING TOGETHER AS FRIENDS
    Before I start I must confess
    A friend I didn't know how to truely be
    because the trust was took out of me.
    I had a heart that was torn
    A soul that use to mourn.

    Then Jesus took control
    For the Sorrow he gave me
    Comfort
    Hurt--Love
    Confusion--Peace
     The Loniness--Joy
    Sadness--Laughter
    Doubt--Trust

    Taught me how to be a friend
    and to trust again.

    As poets we share our story of the same
    and the new life we gain.

    Now for me nothings the same, for today a blessed
    friend have I gained

    Though face to face we have not yet met
    still our spirits connect
    filled with
    Love, Joy, Peace, Gentleness, Goodness
    Faith and Meekness

    For I know the fruit of the spirit you possess
    when we started this quest
    Today a new relationship has began

    Laughing Together As Friends

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    WJduke commented on LAUGHING TOGETHER AS FRIENDS

    04-26-2010

    Hey younglady; Ladypooh-when the AllMighty shine his light on u we are to embrace that moment and share it as a blessing, this is a real-nice poem, verytouching and you are to be rewarded another realm of uplifting spirituality for your thought's...
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    ladypooh

    04/26/2010

    Thank you very much for your heart felt word.

    GentleT commented on LAUGHING TOGETHER AS FRIENDS

    08-08-2009

    The one who can change your life and when your against the wall on him you can call. God Bless.
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    ladypooh

    08/08/2009

    Thank you for your comment.

    cmlestrade commented on LAUGHING TOGETHER AS FRIENDS

    07-23-2009

    Ladypooh every day you grow as a poet. I love your works and the truth in them. I know we all have to look out for grammar and spelling but that evolves as we grow. I am sometimes lazy and don't check spelling and grammar as I type. I look at the poems emotion first and yours are filled with emotion. keep writing you have found your niche.
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    ladypooh

    07/23/2009

    thank you for your heartfelt comment.

    frog commented on LAUGHING TOGETHER AS FRIENDS

    07-22-2009

    This poem really made me feel valued. Your writing is evolving and becoming more focused. I admire you as a person because you are so genuine; and it comes out in your writing. Thank you for sharing it.
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    ladypooh

    07/23/2009

    Thank you frog, for your insight and comment. be bless

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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