Jim

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    This was my best friends stepfather that had past away a couple of years ago.

    Jim

    It was Friday the eighteenth and nothing ever happened like this

    He wasn’t that old and he lost his life

    And when you hear the news

    You won’t believe it either

    He as everyone else was a child from God

     

    You didn’t deserve this

    And you had lots of family members who loved you

    Won’t you come back a lay a hand on them

    Wipe all the tears away

    And tell them your watching over them

    And you will be with them every step of the way

     

    I wasn’t really that close to you

    But I know when I see a family that cares

    And the family that loves you for who you are

    Was truly a lifetime you ever had

     

    In loving memories………..

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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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