Intoxicated driving

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I dedicate this fictional poem to all of the innocent people who have been killed by drunk drivers.

Intoxicated driving

An entire family is dead and I'm the one to blame.
I drove while I was drunk and I'm filled with shame.
I drank too much while I was in that bar.
It was a big mistake when I drove my car.
While I was driving, I hit a stationwagon head on.
Because of me, those innocent people are gone.
I killed those parents and their three kids.
The pain is consuming me because of what I did.
Those kids won't have a life because I cut them down.
I am the one who deserves to be buried in the ground.
When the cops arrived, I was placed under arrest.
As I sit in this cell, I am miserable and depressed.
I wish that this was a nightmare but sadly it's real.
I learned the hard way that drinking and driving kills.

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BrokenHeart2009 commented on Intoxicated driving

10-06-2010

What a wonderful poem poem on drinking and driving. It is very sad, but enlightening. The choices we make how the effects on others can change a life time. I think it is very depressing, but a poem that needs to be shared.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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