Inside

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Inside

Seclusion beating at my door, waking my senses
Love, a distant memory slowly fading
Desire and passion like a loyal dog, always following

For a brief moment, there’s a sound
A desire to come in out of the cold, pounding rain
Once inside,
The warmth is too much…
Acclimatized to the cold
The footsteps start fading

Seclusion returns, enjoying the warmth
Desire and passion imprisoning with suffocating strength
Making the night seem kind

Waiting for the pounding…
Pounding force…
Scaring away seclusion
Fulfilling the desire and passion
Embracing…
Touching…
Loving…
Coming and going
Inside

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dahlusion commented on Inside

01-20-2010

Deep thinking, focused, and loyal to your feelings.

klassik commented on Inside

09-14-2009

this is very nice great read! .

castlemist commented on Inside

08-07-2009

Wow, this is really a powerful poem.."like a loyal dog"...nice work!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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