IN THE SHOWER

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    IN THE SHOWER
    Our bubble bath is a battlefield
    The end of the cold war
    Trapped in a match box
    We are ready to be lit
    My fingers are writing a new poem
    Fisherman opening up oysters
    Looking for a delicate pearl
    Sea lions searching for food
    Our first day of summer
    The flowers are blooming
    Moans from the deep of the Amazon
    The Roars of hungry tigers
    I run to the mountains
    An eclipse is filling up the moon
    Stings from deadly man rays
    Loco motor’s steam engine is on
    The speed of the metro
    Kids on a merry-go-around
    The Manhattan tunnels on rush hour
    The levees are overflowing
    You are a tropical rain forest
    I’m the shuttle leaving the station
    Where the whales come out for air

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    Karma885 commented on IN THE SHOWER

    01-09-2010

    WHAT UR HAVEING A BUBBLE BATH AND STARTING A WAR?.. CUTE POEM. THIS POEMS KINDA WILD. GOOD JOB IT GETS A TEN. BE SURE TO COMMENT ON MY RECENT POEMS
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    cmlestrade commented on IN THE SHOWER

    10-19-2009

    What lovely visions you create of nature. Just seeing what you describe makes one want to pack and leave at once.
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    monkey commented on IN THE SHOWER

    08-03-2009

    I love this. I feel like I've taken a trip without ever having to leave my chair.
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    wwjd72 commented on IN THE SHOWER

    07-30-2009

    emotions run deep and sometimes we are so involved that words are like bold colors that leave a fury of contrast yet confusion as to what we are conveying.I can relate.
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    lightcourier commented on IN THE SHOWER

    04-17-2009

    Great poem. Good job! Thanks! liked the imagery.
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