If you would let me I would...

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    If you would let me I would...

     If you would let me i would...
    Hold you close to my heart,
    Hug you everytime I saw you,
    Kiss you good morning, hello, goodbye, and goodnight,

    I would hold hands with you as we pass my friends,
    Walk you to class and wish you good luck on your test,
    Eat lunch with you and tell you jokes,
    Make myself look stupid just to see you smile,

    I would bring you your favorite thing to eat,
    Bake you cookies just so I could see you,
    Bring you random little gifts,
    Help to make your day a brighter better one,

    If you would let me I would love you,
    Present you to my friends as MY baby,
    Hold you close and just revel at being with you,
    If you would let me I would give you the world and ask for nothing in return.

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    papapaczki commented on If you would let me I would...

    11-30-2010

    A strong message to a potential future boyfriend. Nice write.
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    girlygirl1234 commented on If you would let me I would...

    11-30-2010

    i really like this..its the cutest thing ever. so many people out there would never do this for the one they love
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    lonewolf commented on If you would let me I would...

    11-22-2010

    very nicely done. you'd make any guy proud to be called your boy friend.
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    ImStillHere commented on If you would let me I would...

    11-19-2010

    hahaha this is so cute :) and its true. I definatly love doing those for my baby, just to make him feel good. You really got the Love write down pat :D ~Audrey
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    HopeOhlarik commented on If you would let me I would...

    11-19-2010

    This is a testament to a true love.I wish that the said person in this poem would open their eyes and see how you care bout them. Good write!
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    Lunabella

    01/26/2013

    he let me see the warmth then shoved me out in the cold...

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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