if it were up to me...

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    serioulsly right that would be perfect but there is no such thing as perfect.

    if it were up to me...

     If it were all up to me, the poor would have riches, and the blind could see. The hungary would eat, and the weak would be strong, and the people with hatred would all get along. The ones who are greedy would start to share, and unfriendly people would start to care. The thirsty would drink, and the deaf person hear, and sorrow and sadness would disappear, and that is how the world would be If it were all up to me.

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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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