I can see

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    I can see

    I can see the twinkle in your eye the happiness that is brought to you when we're together i can see throw such beautiful eyes the love that is given to such pure heart and soul and all the love you give to me i can see our life together going further just by looking thru your amazing honey brown eyes.

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    bluewolf commented on I can see

    08-25-2010

    Quite the romantic, eh? A sweet sentiment in your words and, I would imagine, the depth of love that many would wish to inspire in another.

    Rhymer commented on I can see

    08-10-2010

    Nice write about the one you love, must have 40/40 vision. 20/20 looking through your eyes and 20/20 looking through hers.

    Chaos128 commented on I can see

    08-10-2010

    Ha ha Very well done. in order to see such wonders, you must have the gift of special vision. Congratulations : )

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