I am suffocating.......
I'm suffocating......But no one can see me there....No one to give me air.....But then I see you....And suddenly I can breathe.....But then you turn and walk away.....I choke on the breath you gave to me.....I'm still suffocating....I am suffocating.......
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smoothdame commented on I am suffocating.......
12-01-2010
- "Im suffocating but no one can see me there" great start such passion I like the flow of this poem great job.
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12/01/2010
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