Help me

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    Help me

     Whispers
    all i hear day and night,
    school and home,
    talking.
    They keep spreading,
    they hurt inside and out,
    they lead to suicides,
    they hurt you,
    they hurt me,
    i wish that we ,
    could control this intindy,
    They spread and hurt,
    you can't desribe it,
    you try to get away,
    but fail,
    the talking,
    putting down like a dog,
    it hurts,
    you hide,
    and i want to know,
    can you help me?

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

    babygirl4028’s Poems (40)

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