Head aches

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    i have had a 24/7 head ache for the past 3 years

    Head aches

     

    As the thoughts spill in

    My mind crushes like dried leaves

    Piercing               

    Stabbing

    Eating me away

    Regurgitating who I am

    And replacing me

    Like a cracked skull

    The pain seems only to spill out now

    Staining everything I touch

    Numb to my inner core

    I helplessly move on

    Shattered

    Waiting to escape

    This imprisoned state of mind

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    SILKYTWEED commented on Head aches

    06-24-2009

    Excellent Write....you are very talented and seem to write above your age, keep it up, you are very good and deep...thanks for sharing!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

    liltrudesi92’s Poems (19)

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    In my head 2
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    My Blissful Blasphmey 2
    They 3
    wishing 0
    Sick 4
    I never wanted 0
    good enough 1
    to my bro 1
    Wolf 2
    Amazing 1
    Time ( the end) 0
    Need 0
    Deteriorating 1
    Gone 2
    4 months 0
    one month 1
    Head aches 1
    My slice of heaven 2