Gone

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Gone

Slitting my wrists

I further bleed out pain

Killing what was rightfully mine

I sit sucked out of life

Drowning neck up in guilt

Like tarring the wings off a butterfly

The gash in my heart pulsates

Yet the drum line in my chest

Is a constant reminder

Of the unicorn I slaughter

Thought fate has a plan of its own

I choose the road I’m on

And with each breathe I take

I’m one moment further from you

Left standing

With just red ink in my veins

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LadyLuck commented on Gone

07-01-2009

i love the bleeding picture you paint here. its beautiful in a bloody kinda way.

SILKYTWEED commented on Gone

06-24-2009

Excellent Write....like the style you got it going on this piece, I especially like how you ended it "with just red ink in my veins"...Thanks for sharing!

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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