Had Days Been Brighter~

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    Had Days Been Brighter~
    Harder then life itself when pain comes;
    too bare deep inside the soul.
    When you lose someone you're close to;
    and those tears are not a shame to show:
    Wounding the most deeper soul.
    When you love someone that's so close.

    Had better days been brighter to know,
    Time would of turn the final page.
    Every breath I take I refuse to release,
    This hurt I felt on that sudden day.
    My time will come when I lay to rest;
    Just remember you're the one I love the best.

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    graceladymn commented on Had Days Been Brighter~

    02-07-2009

    Beautiful moving piece.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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