good-byes are harder than ellos

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good-byes are harder than ellos

hello's are hard
you don't know what to say,
you would look at me,
but i'd look the other way.

i blushed everytime i saw you,
you talked to me everyday,
you smiled, and you laughed,
but once again i looked away.

finally one day,
you talked to me once more,
and finally i got the courage,
to say hi and not ignore.

from that point on,
we were together everyday,
untill you left me,
and went far, far away.

we had to say goodbye,
they are harder than ellos,
but after a short time,
i finally let you go.

i know it will be hard,
for both you and i,
but whenever we get lonley,
we can look up on the sky,

and i will know that God, the father,
is watching over you,
and you will also know,
that he's watching me to,

he'll bring us back together,
before to much time has passed,
and we can be together,
once again, once more, at last.


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hawk12399 commented on good-byes are harder than ellos

04-14-2011

one word - amazing. this poem is really good i hope you keep writing i look forward to reading more of your poems, your really talented

sk8erpoet commented on good-byes are harder than ellos

02-24-2011

great poem....its true goodbyes are the hardest thing...great write...sk8

TaCoNiNjA35F00 commented on good-byes are harder than ellos

02-21-2011

amazing:) great write. I can relate to this...keep it up

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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