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Pet PeevesMy pet peeve about reading some of the poems is spelling errors. Very distracting for me. What are yours? |
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Re: Pet PeevesQuote: Originally Posted by Oblaidon My pet peeve about reading some of the poems is spelling errors. Very distracting for me. What are yours? Spelling errors, and using slang words. Unless the poem is all slang, it drives me nuts to see things out of place out of the blue. It seems to blow the wind out of a poem. -Papa Paczki |
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Re: Pet PeevesMy challenge is reading a piece two or tree times and I still don't get the meaning, or only a small portion of it. (that doesn't mean there's anything wrong with the artist, just the beholder) |
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Re: Pet PeevesI'd have to say spelling and slang as well. |
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Re: Pet PeevesYou got it Kiddo, the P and V really turns my lights off |
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Re: Pet PeevesI also have trouble reading poetry that is of a more...explicit kind. |
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Re: Pet PeevesI totally agree with Kt and Marsink. I have no problem with poets writing whatever they feel, just don't ask me to read and comment on something I feel uncomfortable with. If you read what I write, you'd know I'm more family oriented. I'm not going to comment on something explicit. TS |
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Re: Pet Peeves I agree with Bandit1192.My poetry is more family oriented as well and I will not read |
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Re: Pet PeevesHear, hear! |
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Re: Pet PeevesPlease read my slang free, spelling error free poetry. Hehe I rhymed. |
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Re: Pet PeevesI read Heart of a Poet and it is sure to please, with great elements presented as a classic. Last edited by Marsink 11-16-2009 at 11:43:25 AM |
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Re: Pet PeevesI have only one poem up on this site, but I would like to make this statement. Why are there so many, so called, poets on here that are allowed to put up wacko things ? Surely someone on the staff of Originalpoetry can draw up some guidelines to improve their image. I've tried reading some poetry here, and what do I get...people with anger that spill out onto these pages, unintelligent meanings, words that are terribly misspelled, homophone misuse, words uncapped that should be capped, and other English disregards. And then there are those who seem to get a thrill out of using filthy words as if there is no caring about rules of pornography...doesn't the staff of OP have any standards ? |
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Re: Pet PeevesPeople the spew all the vile words into their poems may consider what they say art. There is art produced from sadness and anger. What one person may consider art, another may consider pornographic or vile. This site let's us be the judge what is art and what is not. |
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Re: Pet PeevesGood answer, my man. Carry on... |
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Re: Re: Pet PeevesQuote: Originally Posted by Oblaidon People the spew all the vile words into their poems may consider what they say art. There is art produced from sadness and anger. What one person may consider art, another may consider pornographic or vile. This site let's us be the judge what is art and what is not. I was told by someone that poems are like a peep hole into someone's soul. Many people with eratic, vile souls produce eratic, vile poems. They release some of this junk they carry around with them into a poem. I would just move on after reading such a poem. Just like we can't all agree on which music is best. We can't agree on what poems are best. Even flowers grow in junk yards. It's not me! It's my pen that calls for blood, lol!!! http://www.originalpoetry.com/my-pen-calls I get what your saying though Oblaidon! |
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Re: Pet Peevesmy biggest pet peeves would have to be cliches |
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Re: Re: Pet PeevesQuote: Yeah, and those giddy things like...lol, lmao, and ur. Why not just type them out...seems more personal that way... |
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Re: Pet Peevesyeah, heck. what the hay/ know what i mean/any way you slice it/gotta be da bomb/what took so long/you're crowding my space/ where are we, anyway/enough said/full of dread/ he's dead, Jim/muddied up the water/ you know what you otter[do]/cant' get enough/that's gonna leave a mark/Marck, my words/left fer dead/bleed me dry/why oh why/not gonna fly/the die is cast(guilty)/not gonna last/love you so/love you bro/ I insist/ you're on my list/get the gist/eat my fist/ lost in a mist/that's a new twist/oops,! I missed/sure was fun/I'm done/you're the one/one more time/that's a crime /it's a cryin shame/who's to blame/you got game/I'll pick your brain/down the drain/that's insane/my main man/the game plan/you go girl/give it a whirl/if that's what it takes/give me a break/a fatal mistake/jump in the lake/Duh, you think/quick as a wink/what's all the stink/we're on the brink/you're a fink/before you can blink/pretty in pink/ I'm in sync/what's all the fuss/get on the bus/you've really done it now/ don't have a cow/I played the fool/bottom of the gene pool/school of hard knocks/that really rocks/knocks my socks off/cough up a lung/spring has sprung/there's countless others/so,whybother.......................................there's nothin to it/not gonna do it Last edited by Marsink 12-05-2009 at 06:10:49 PM |
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Re: Pet PeevesHey Mark, at least you didn't use any giddy things. Now go take your medication before they come for you...the guys in the white jackets, that is... |
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Re: Pet PeevesThis is a duel in cliche, so fire away, while it's today, above the fray |
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Re: Pet PeevesAnd the sunrise and alls its glory. |
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Re: Pet PeevesI have a headache... |
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Re: Pet PeevesAh let's see...my pet peeves would be: a poem presented as one long paragraph - I find it difficult to read! Using text words (ur, lol, idk) drives me nuts! I love words and language, so the whole abbreviation thing really gets me. I text in full sentences!! Drives my family crazy... Last edited by kah 11-22-2009 at 08:41:39 AM |
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Re: Pet PeevesI would say my number one pet peeve in poetry is the misuse of proper grammer, especially those of higher grad because I'm trying hard to grasp it! Second would be those RATE RIPPERS that used to fly by smashing good poems into a forever climb to a decent standing! Third I would say is a poor touch in presentation. |
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Re: Re: Pet PeevesQuote: Originally Posted by ccslim I would say my number one pet peeve in poetry is the misuse of proper grammer, especially those of higher grad because I'm trying hard to grasp it! Second would be those RATE RIPPERS that used to fly by smashing good poems into a forever climb to a decent standing! Third I would say is a poor touch in presentation. I used to feel the way you do here, Slim, but I've found out that lots of the writers here in OP, say........it is the words of the poet, and they can choose whether to misspell words, use vulgarity if they wish, and if we don't like their poem...move onto another's. |
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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)