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09-27-2009 at 01:12:48 PM

Secretdreams

I am new in the site. How can I get my poems rate? Please help smirk

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09-28-2009 at 09:03:26 AM

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I am new in the site. How can I get my poems rate? Please help smirk


Welcome to the site! You can post 'em here, or in the Read My Poetry forum. This one is more for critiquing than just general reading. Also build up your friends network, and you can check in the chat room for people.

-Papa Paczki snake

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09-28-2009 at 08:36:00 PM

I'LL BE THERE





… I’ll be there, where I lived …

…where I played… where I laughed and cried

Where my body grew and my spirit shined…

Where my seeds were planted

…Soon… I’ll be there



Soon… I’ll be there, in the sunny forests…

…In the deepest oceans, … in the light blue skies

No regrets, nor sorrows

Only peaceful thoughts, unreserved love

To embrace my fate

…Soon… I’ll be there



Soon… I’ll be there, and be at this juncture

…in the land who adopted me, with the guy who loves me

Where I found tranquility, care for, and contentment

…during the distressing lessons of life’s events

…Soon… I’ll be there



Soon.. I’ll be there, where I lived…

…where I played… where I laughed and cried

Where my body grew and my spirit shined..

Where my seeds were planted

Soon…I’ll be there…Soon [/i]

Last edited by Secretdreams 09-28-2009 at 08:39:10 PM

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10-05-2009 at 06:34:48 PM

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IT SOUNDS GOOD, GIVES ME HOPE. KEEP IT COMING. smile smile

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.
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