EinStud Reviews

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    Hello. I give 3 reviews per week, sometimes more, but never less. (not affiliated with this website of course). You will automatically get a 10 from me, but in exchange I will thrash your poem and pull it like taffy (a good, clean, fun, pulling). Please remember, I am judging the poem, the speaker in the poem,... not you the Poet. My opinion can only be swayed by good reasoning. Yes, I can change my mind. So good luck. You got your Ten. I am not trying to win any popularity contests! PS A Haiku poetic response to your poem is also provided. The title will include something from your title, so it will be easy to find. Peace Out, your friend... EinStud .

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    and you'll hate it

    and you will love it

    but in the end...

    rise above it

     

    -EinStud

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    (Believe it or not, this is a Haiku poem. It is not in traditional form, but it is limited to 17 syllables.)

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    EinStud commented on EinStud Reviews

    04-10-2010

    Maybe we can have a group of us all doing this same thing and call ourselves, "The Poem Pirates" (continue the island theme)? It is just a thought, and really requires no organization, other than committment (and even then, who would know you skipped a week?)... think it over, let it marinate.
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    Springsize

    04/11/2010

    I love your Poem Pirates idea... and so like your critiques, even when they are harsh. I really, really appreciate it when anyone jams a pin in my bubble of perfection and I find I need more polishing... and to be honest, since you do thrive on a candid tone... I'll admit that I have an entire arsenal of bullets for three poems I've found (of which, I decided to walk away), otherwise, I was planning to take them to the annual Mayberry skeet shoot and rip those puppies to shreds and then feed them to my piranhas. But I am a coward... you are not... and really, we need good critiques, like yours... to help us write. Ok now, I did not come here begging scraps of comments from your table of wise, and if Really so, maybe I should have worn a disguise then... but it has been so obvious, who we all are, that there is really no use tying to hide... Why, do you know I once played an online game and mathematically figured out how to whap the system and so created nearly 395 yahoo account names and was to wear the Sybil crown for 5 months.... bad susan

    EinStud

    04/11/2010

    Springsize, you are the deep thinker with wit.

    EinStud commented on EinStud Reviews

    04-10-2010

    On Sunday morning (or so), I'll search for 3 poems if there is no one on the list. I am easy. If you want a poem read with respect and misinterpretaion, I am the man. Just ask me to review your poem. It is direct, but I won't say no. You get a 10. I get full freedom to analyze your poem. I have started as list, and will just start at the top.
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    Springsize commented on EinStud Reviews

    04-08-2010

    You leave good comments, I've seen you ... whapping lightning bolts all over this OP place... you are quite striking with good critique hits, giving a good electricity zap. ,, and you have gumption and you wear it suave, with class. Mostly, good poem, real message.
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    EinStud

    04/10/2010

    Thanks! I have to be a bit more respectful than I was on the "Poetry Survivor Island" game. Only because I truly feel that every poem has a silver lining in it somewhere. To find it, is the adventure...

    MindNumbing commented on EinStud Reviews

    04-05-2010

    Sounds like a horribly traumatic experience... and one I'm DEFINITELY game for :) Feel free to rip any of my poems apart and know that I'll value any critique you care to offer.
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    EinStud

    04/08/2010

    You are on the list.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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    Time Lost Gathering 1 06/06/2010
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    D013 Love innuendo 1 04/25/2010
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    Generation fire 2 04/12/2010
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    D012 Read to me once more 1 04/11/2010
    D011 Be first to fire 1 04/11/2010
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    D006 There's a time for rhyme 1 03/23/2010
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    From nothing to never done 1 03/21/2010
    Abundant Delight 0 03/21/2010
    Fatcist 1-2-3 Trilogy 1 03/18/2010
    Fatcism Lives On 3 03/17/2010
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    D002 Let it all pour down 0 03/07/2010
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    The Begending 2 11/08/2009
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