Dying to Be Loved

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    This is simple, short, and sweet. Gets right down to the heart of the matter, replete!

    Dying to Be Loved

    Somewhere I know,
    Now there is,
    As simple a heart,
    As the only one,
    That needs love!

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    redbloodink commented on Dying to Be Loved

    11-28-2009

    sometimes few words can say more than a thousand..... This write was and is outstanding to read..... The promise of love and receiving it, is as simple as giving it to every-one wanting nothing in return,..... This isn't a physical love or anything we give...... This is a love we as humans don't always understand or get....... thanx for sharing ..... Red

    MrGee commented on Dying to Be Loved

    11-18-2009

    EXCELLENT! I am a big fan of concise poems and this work is perfectly written. a 10

    dumplin commented on Dying to Be Loved

    11-18-2009

    I think I saw this in a fortune cookie. LOL......

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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