A Caring Heart
A lonely person,Dreaming of a life,
Seems to have,
A lonely plight,
Broken, battered,
Ounce for ounce,
He still has it!
A Caring Heart
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Tags: Allegory
Poem Commentary
This shows how we need to keep trying. The struggle is in us and we have it. The strength we need is what we have to hold on to in order for us to keep right on going.
Dreaming of a life,
Seems to have,
A lonely plight,
Broken, battered,
Ounce for ounce,
He still has it!
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dumplin commented on A Caring Heart
12-03-2009
- grrrrrrrr, I want more! I really wish you'd take the time to sit down and compose something long and descriptive. Your poems are strong and beautiful, but I long for more of you.
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