Dreamsing

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  • Dreams

    Dreamsing

     The words you could not sing slow enough
    Drifted up through the cracks
    I heard the voice from another room
    And took pleasure in picturing your face
    in my mind

    The features I did not know
    Filled quickly in with imagination
    To match the fervent glow
    of your peculiar timbre

    So I began to wander
    Room to room in search of you
    But with hesitance I move
    Fearing the you I built to be
    too much a fictional view


    Fear like the dream I wake to find
    Has been nothing more than a beautiful lie 

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    Chaos128 commented on Dreamsing

    09-21-2010

    I decided to check out a 2nd example of your work to see if the first one I saw was a fluke. It wasn't... Your work is exquisitely real.
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    CaelTaylor

    10/13/2010

    Thank you so much. I think that is one of the best complements to get, making writing seem real to others. I usually have a hard time relating the mood to my audience. I am so glad you enjoyed this.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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