DEVASTATED

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DEVASTATED

Devastated, that’s how you left me.

Enough, I think I’m to close to the edge.

Visually, in me, you can’t see what you’ve done.

Asshole, what I wish I could be.

Self, the only person I can depend on.

Tragedy, that’s what love is.

Alone, that’s how I feel.

Tainted, I will never be the same.

Enraged, anger always stops sadness.

Devastated, that’s how you left me.

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trocka7 commented on DEVASTATED

07-04-2009

Very creative! I really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing it!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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house’s Poems (17)

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untitled 0
MY CAUSE OF DEATH 3
My heart 2
FREEDOM 1
HOPE NEVER DIES 1
HOPE 2
THIS IS REALITY 2
DEVASTATED 1
JUST ANOTHER DAY 1
Nothing Yet 1
heartache 0
THE SADDEST DAY 4
MY LIFE IN MUSIC 3
Kim's Poem 1
UNTITLED 2
Invincible 1
Memories Of A Nightmare 4