Dedication

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    Dedication

     I am not ashamed to say, I had a friend
    Who broke my heart so bad I wanted it to end

    Found it hard to function from day to day
    Thought the pain would go away

    As each day passes all I can think is, How
    Can I make it right, How can I get him back now

    He never loved me the way a lover should
    He never really treated me good

    I thought he had something that I needed
    But he gave me pain and all for no reason

    I swear I did everything that I could
    To make him love me I thought he would

    Even to this very day
    I keep thinking of a word to say

    To make him love me and be true
    Now I am opening my heart to you

    To see part of the pain I must endure
     For giving my heart to someone who was insecure.

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    canary commented on Dedication

    07-13-2009

    That is the perfect poem for me right about now. Especially when you know you are worth loving.
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    Chrisjan commented on Dedication

    07-11-2009

    Very well written ! Your heart and soul are speaking but he, doesn't seem to understand you & what you are willingtoi share. Thanks for sharing.
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    Mosfabulous commented on Dedication

    07-10-2009

    I love this poem. I feel the same way about my ex-boyfriend. I thought i really loved me. I said that I loved him,but he did'nt love me,
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    Aza

    07/10/2009

    Love is so hard to find. Especially when you give your all. People aren't used to it and they abuse the most precious gift you can give Love. It is sad:(

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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