Crush

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    Crush

    Do you believe in love at first sight?
    I'm not sure I do, but if I'm right
    Everytime I see your face, I'm there
    In a place where I don't care
    About age or myths of how love should be
    I can only think, of you and me
    And sometimes when you smile at me
        I seem to melt can others see?

    I can't think... have to tell myself to breathe
    My heart beats so fast, I can't conceive
    I know it's wrong but I believe
    In love and passion and taking a chance
    On something that might be romance
    Every word you say to me
       Seems like a song in harmony

    I know that you're just passing time
    But what you say stays on my mind
    I fantasize the day will come
    When you will say "You are the one"
    I will allow into my world
    My thoughts are like a silly girl

    I'm not sure if you can understand
    I'll take it slow and hope you can
    Find a feeling in your heart
    Something real, would be a start
    Look deeper than the eye can see
    Make this dream a reality

    Together we  could have some fun
    Share a love and when we're done
    Look back on good times that we shared
    Let's take a chance, you seem to care?



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    jmorrone commented on Crush

    07-15-2009

    I think love is such a great thing. I'm so greatful that I have a partner in my life that I love. This poem reminds me of how I feel waking up and feeling blessed to know that I'm loved! Great stuff.
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    Indigogreen16 commented on Crush

    07-06-2009

    This poem is beautiful. I like how you mix the the poetic devices.....The passion flows flawless. I really enjoyed this one. Thank you.
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    AmadeusEx commented on Crush

    07-03-2009

    very nice poem aza, i especially enjoyed the italicized lines, it was as if you were speaking under your breath, or like it was a private thought....very cool, you write very well
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    Aza

    07/03/2009

    Thank you so much, I am glad you caught that.

    kikilc commented on Crush

    07-02-2009

    I'm glad I've selected this to be the first piece I have read on this site. It makes me smile to remember what love feels like. You have truly inspired me and blessed my spirit. Great job, I look forward to many more.
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    Aza

    07/02/2009

    I am always in the state of giving. Love is my favorite season, even when I am not part of that love. You are more than kind, and I have hundreds. Thank you sooo much.

    UNIQUEPOET1 commented on Crush

    07-01-2009

    AWESOME PIECE!!! IT'S AMAZING THE FEELINGS WE GET BECASUE OF ANOTHER, HOW THEY SEEM TO TOUCH US DEEP WITHIN.. LOVE IS SUCH A BEAUTIFUL THING!!! EXCELLENT PIECE AZA...
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    Aza

    07/02/2009

    I have series of Romantic Love poems to submit. I hope you will enjoy them as much as I enjoyed writing them. Thank you very much.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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